Oddler's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[*What Have I Done? *]

I've heard this song before

I guess this is your updated version? Congrats on Weekly award status. Told you that you had something special in this one!

Lot of heartfelt emotion in this song. Tragedy strikes and in comes the regret or possibly shame by the sound of it. I can't completely remember where you were taking this but those images evoke me when I hear this tune all over again.

I feel a bit different when I listen to this song. I'm guessing you changed it around a bit, no? Anywho, this song deserves a SOLID 9 to me from this listen around. Congrats!

KTRECORDS responds:

Hey, thanks for checking out the final version! Thanks for your constructive criticism on your earlier reviews. You hit the nail on the head when you said you visualized this song being about tragedy, regret and shame. That's kind of what I was hoping people would hear.

I didn't really change anything around on it. I added some percussion to it (crashing cymbal and toka drum) to give it a more powerful feel. I also messed a little bit with the levels of some of the instruments as well. Other than that, it's almost the same version as the other one.

Thansk for taking the time to review this again and I hope I can make more for you to enjoy in the future!

-Jason
KTRECORDS

[_SiLents_-Fuck my own fantasy]

Lacking a bit for a Rock song

Need more balls and edge to it to be a better Rock song. I think you're on the right path of it but you're approaching it at a wrong angle. I'd change the sound of the "instruments" used. Maybe, go with something more traditional or some sounds that feel a bit more edgy and raw. Doesn't have to be a large amount but a couple notches up on the edgy scale with the instruments is good enough.

[lost garden loop]

Not bad for a quick loop

If you made the loop transition a little better I'd give it a higher score since it's meant to loop. The actual music is pretty good...I can really feel it.

sonicxtreme responds:

yea....your right.transitions are one of my flaws...hehe thanks for your review

[PCP Stiffy]

All about the Vocals in this one

I like the monkey boy at the start of the song making the nature type sounds. Although, the guy talking in plain english...is a bit more on the questionable side! lol
The music was a bit stiffy as you would say.

Not sure if you noticed but when the Vocals come in and out you can hear the static click on and off as the vocals come in and out. Something to take note of. Anyway, I like the wackiness of the song.

[MachinegunMan]

Nice author comment LOL

I hope you're not serious lol. That would definitely be something seeing how it's only 55 seconds :P

A bit too short a little on the repetitive side. Enhance the length and enhance the quality of variation.

Machinegun Man....is that a Metal Gear 1 reference by any slim chance? i'm a gamer hehe

EpicMastermind responds:

Lol I have not a Playstation, I have played the Metal Gear Solid demo for PC though :P

Lol I just made this song because I was bored xD

[PCP Methal Fury]

lol I think I headbanged!?

Buahaha, I head banged a little bit on this song. I don't normally do that. Not sure what that means. There is this pummeling intenseness to a song but not overbearingly dominant. I kinda like the beat and the song at 1:50+ I got even more into it.

Nice work ;D

[Selu Vibra - Divine (remix)]

Not bad

Some parts of the song don't really feel like they sync up properly. Transitions from some parts of the songs feels a bit....hard to explain.

I think it's OK for the most part. My body isn't reacting negatively to it so I'll take that as a good sign to bring you. Could use some work however I can't clearly explain what is good and what is a bit off on this song.

For the most part though, I think your did a noteworthy job. Could use a bit sprucing up however but all in all. Good job.

[Ambient Chill (Dj Sirah)]

Don't tase me ,bro. Don't taaaase me.

I think you delivered what your title expresses. Umm...not sure if you should have pushed it a little farther.

It is very relaxed and chill-out style.

What is the name of "instrument" or sound effect used to create the beeping/glittery sound used here and there through out the song? Not sure if it's name...although I don't feel it fits into the chill part....maybe more of the ambient side.

Anyway, I feel you delivered what you say the song is so I'll give you an 8 for creating it.

DjSirah responds:

Yeah.. Well, im kinda new into this music stuff.
But thanks for the Review, its alot of help!
Might try to make a V2 of this, ;)

[Ich weiss nicht]

I don't mind not understanding the words

Not the biggest fan of rap though. Biased...I know. Anyway, onward!

Did you use a persons voice for the girl talking in English and speed up her voice or raise the pitch on it? I'm not sure if it's natural or not lol . You never know.

The song seems pretty solid for something on the Radio even. So there's no way I can take my bias out on it because it feels professional albeit not my type of music. I'll rate high due to the skillz, yo. hehe

BUggAT responds:

No, the girl in the hook and the beat are made by Swollen Drums.
The first two parts are by Bekkert and the last two by me.

Thank you for ya 9!

[Heartbeat song]

Ehh

I like the lyrics...although I'm not as fond as the delivery of them.

I feel the actual words and wording of the lyrics are pretty good and evoke feelings in me BUT without music in the back it falls flat for me a great deal.

To improve I would add some music (even simple music , tune , beat, sounds etc) to greatly enhance the song. Maybe even add some pauses as to not have it end so quick.

It has potential brotha.