Lacking a bit for a Rock song
Need more balls and edge to it to be a better Rock song. I think you're on the right path of it but you're approaching it at a wrong angle. I'd change the sound of the "instruments" used. Maybe, go with something more traditional or some sounds that feel a bit more edgy and raw. Doesn't have to be a large amount but a couple notches up on the edgy scale with the instruments is good enough.
Not bad for a quick loop
If you made the loop transition a little better I'd give it a higher score since it's meant to loop. The actual music is pretty good...I can really feel it.
yea....your right.transitions are one of my flaws...hehe thanks for your review
All about the Vocals in this one
I like the monkey boy at the start of the song making the nature type sounds. Although, the guy talking in plain english...is a bit more on the questionable side! lol
The music was a bit stiffy as you would say.
Not sure if you noticed but when the Vocals come in and out you can hear the static click on and off as the vocals come in and out. Something to take note of. Anyway, I like the wackiness of the song.
Nice author comment LOL
I hope you're not serious lol. That would definitely be something seeing how it's only 55 seconds :P
A bit too short a little on the repetitive side. Enhance the length and enhance the quality of variation.
Machinegun Man....is that a Metal Gear 1 reference by any slim chance? i'm a gamer hehe
Lol I have not a Playstation, I have played the Metal Gear Solid demo for PC though :P
Lol I just made this song because I was bored xD
lol I think I headbanged!?
Buahaha, I head banged a little bit on this song. I don't normally do that. Not sure what that means. There is this pummeling intenseness to a song but not overbearingly dominant. I kinda like the beat and the song at 1:50+ I got even more into it.
Nice work ;D
Not bad
Some parts of the song don't really feel like they sync up properly. Transitions from some parts of the songs feels a bit....hard to explain.
I think it's OK for the most part. My body isn't reacting negatively to it so I'll take that as a good sign to bring you. Could use some work however I can't clearly explain what is good and what is a bit off on this song.
For the most part though, I think your did a noteworthy job. Could use a bit sprucing up however but all in all. Good job.
Don't tase me ,bro. Don't taaaase me.
I think you delivered what your title expresses. Umm...not sure if you should have pushed it a little farther.
It is very relaxed and chill-out style.
What is the name of "instrument" or sound effect used to create the beeping/glittery sound used here and there through out the song? Not sure if it's name...although I don't feel it fits into the chill part....maybe more of the ambient side.
Anyway, I feel you delivered what you say the song is so I'll give you an 8 for creating it.
Yeah.. Well, im kinda new into this music stuff.
But thanks for the Review, its alot of help!
Might try to make a V2 of this, ;)
I don't mind not understanding the words
Not the biggest fan of rap though. Biased...I know. Anyway, onward!
Did you use a persons voice for the girl talking in English and speed up her voice or raise the pitch on it? I'm not sure if it's natural or not lol . You never know.
The song seems pretty solid for something on the Radio even. So there's no way I can take my bias out on it because it feels professional albeit not my type of music. I'll rate high due to the skillz, yo. hehe
No, the girl in the hook and the beat are made by Swollen Drums.
The first two parts are by Bekkert and the last two by me.
Thank you for ya 9!
Ehh
I like the lyrics...although I'm not as fond as the delivery of them.
I feel the actual words and wording of the lyrics are pretty good and evoke feelings in me BUT without music in the back it falls flat for me a great deal.
To improve I would add some music (even simple music , tune , beat, sounds etc) to greatly enhance the song. Maybe even add some pauses as to not have it end so quick.
It has potential brotha.
Very dramatic
I love the thunder and rain in the back. It gives this a dark and emotional vibe to it. I'm all about the dark and emotional....although that does not sound very cool lewl.
Dark elements such as the thunder and rain really make the piece a song that feels like a turbulent time in a movie or something.
Emotional as in dramatic...kind of pumps the emotions of the listener or watcher of a movie.
I think this is a by short of a perfect 10. Very nice work man. Very nice.
Hey? Dark and emotional is cool xD At the end of the song I added a few bird sounds, kind of like the storm was over as the song ended,
thanks for the review!
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