Oddler's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[_-={Moonlit Cobble}=-_]

Should be #1 on top 5

I really like this one and What have I done.

This one is definitely my favorite out of the five. Sounds so laid back and peaceful. Sounds like a peaceful summers day in a field in the peaceful golden countryside.

Just read your Author's comment and you say this is a Night song about the moon. hehe. I got the completely wrong day, no? Anyway, I think it's a great song and deserves #1

MaestroRage responds:

Day, night, what's the difference? ^_^
Thank you for your kind compliments though. We worked hard on this piece!
But that's also very nice imagery, I like it. Thank you for listening!
With love,
Lady Arsenic

[Kriz: ReMotion]

Nice sound

I really like your beat mixed with the the rest of the tune.

I hear a lot of stuff in the Portal and a lot of people try mixing oil with water. This song is hugely complimented by itself and works well.

Nice job.

["Alone" - F-777]

You milked it right

Lot of things you did right on the song which led my ears to feeling good as I listened. Nice work and congrats on making the 5.

[Righteous Inquiry]

Hmm...questionable feedback.

The title is a bit interesting and got me in the listen. It's hard to express what doesn't move me the right way about this song. It can be a bit emotionless I think....kinda goes goofy toward the end too....Mmm...hard to articulate. I did like some parts of the drums though. Hit or miss applies on a lot of the song it seems

ragingmullet responds:

Thanks for the input. I realize that it indeed, sounds like something is missing. I have had this song like this forever and I couldn't find anything I liked to add so I just submit it as is.

[-=z3=-Moon Loop]

Cool "Loop"

I can't rate it super high because it is only 9 seconds long but I love what you have. Wish you made it a bit longer so I could justify to myself why I gave it a higher score.

If you could work on anything besides the length, I'd make the loop transition from end to start a bit smoother. I think you should re-work this into a song...it kind of has a Japanese feeling to it, doesn't it?

Zn3tz responds:

Ok if you think so, I´ll see what I can do, but I can´t guarantee that it will be good : /

[Riot Ignition - Blackout]

Wow, nice.

I really liked your explosion at the start. It had a lot of personality...after that I felt the bass getting a bit annoying and a bit repetitive and I might have skipped an extra beat on the bass for a measure or something. I haven't been a musician in a long time.

I think you have something in this song. I'd expand it a bit more instead of cycling back to older parts of the song. It's good and there is quality in here though.

whooty2 responds:

Thanks, yes indeed, maybe a little more variation in the rythm

[(FMC) -=Hamburgers=-]

Milkshakez0rz next song?

Can I have french fries with that?

Not sure how you derived "Hamburgers" to represent the song , lol but hey.

I want to hear Tofu Soup song next, ok?

FunkmasterCatking responds:

I didn't know what to name it, so I just called it hamburgers (same case with Muffins)

[{Sun} Emoification]

So-so

Some of it sounds really cool. Some of it sounds kinda hokey....I don't even think that's a word in the English dictionary. The bass sounding part sounds like something out of Mario RPG if you've ever played it.

Like I said...ok in some parts could use a bit more work.

[Party like uh sad slut(new)]

lol

Not the biggest fan of rap. But the lyrics are funny haha

I'd work on your lyric delivery a bit on rhythm. Lyrics made me laugh though.

Deathzone responds:

thanks, yea i'm goofy on these tracks. your welcome to look thru my stuff.

[nF-Stalker]

Hmm...

I like the ominous vocals or humming in the back. You put a lot of work into the drums I can see. Still feel it's lacking a key element....hard to describe.

NeuralFusion responds:

Yeah, that's my aussie accent saying "im a stalker" in the background haha.

Yeah, This song is almost done. longest i've ever worked on a track like a few months or so. Usually i complete my songs in like 2 hours :(

The key element was Harder drums and a underlining deep pad.