Don't worry, I'm listening...
This one isn't that great like you said.....................BUT.........
.BUUUUUT I can see you could easily turn this UP and turn it around if you added some more depth to it and diversity. A lot of the song is the same so if you would have added a change in direction so that what you have lead somewhere bigger that'd be great. Twink around with it a little. I'll give you double-fives.