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Pone

Some of the song sounds really good some of it is questionable. It felt a bit hard to grasp. Not too bad though.

Hmm

The intro was a bit slow into going into the meat of the song. I was questioning if there was going to be any content inside.

The lyrics sound pretty good and I can feel myself getting into them. There is one problem about it though. The sound quality was a bit course while you were singing. I'm looking at your myspace address and I may guess that the non-restrictive Newgrounds version is on your site?

I'd also be careful with those symbols o.O they felt like they were getting out of hand. The rest of the song sounded pretty good other than that.

Sounds good

The song sounds very chirpy and happy. This could sound like music to a SNES game or something where you're in a park. One of those older '90 SNES Side-scrollers.

I only one problem with the song. It sounds a bit repetitive at times... The song is great but the main melody feels a bit looped. If you were to expand the song and have more variations I could give this piece a higher score...

Although, this IS getting an 8 to show you that it IS good. You could probably have made it a 10 to me with a bit more variation~ Overall...I think it sounds pretty good. Nice work. ^.-

DSK666 responds:

Thanx for your opinion, ill work on trying to fix that

Cool

I really loved the vocals. Was that you singing? Not many songs in the Audio Portal with lyrics. Sounds great, nice work~

Piano fits in well

You've got a real interesting piece here. What kind of string instrument was it that you used at the start? Regular guitar? I'm not the best guesser of instruments heh. Piano came in later and sounded really fitting. I loved how the song drifted off and ended over the last 30 seconds or so.

Overall sounds pretty well made. nice job

Yodamanjaro responds:

Thanks.

Not bad

Pretty good beat...I'm not a very good beat reviewer but this one is pretty good.

Ehh

I'm a little iffy on the song. Some of the parts I like a lot and some of the parts I question why it's in there. The intro to the song seems a little weird to me. When I first heard it . . . it sounded like that audio portion was a bit damaged. I'm not sure how attached you are to the intro but I'd swap it personally.

After the Intro when the really sweet kick ass Bass came in. I thought you did a crazy good job with the bass. It sounded so good. It gives it a really mellow cool feeling.

Anytime that intro sequence kind of came in I felt for me the song's value go down a bit and in every sequence that it wasn't dominating the sounds you hear whatever was playing at the moment sounded really well.

Overall...I think I'd really like this a bit more without the intro sequence bumping in kind of scratching at the good parts of the song.

Great Song

Awesome song. There's a touch of Holyness in the song. Nice work.

Sounds []D R E "[]" "[]" Y sweet

There is about half a teaspoon of repetitiveness somewhere in there. About 90% of the song sounds good though so I wouldn't worry too much. You got something good here, buddy. Keep up the good work.

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DzGuy responds:

Trying my best to make 100% of my songs to sound good. :P or at least 99%.

Thanks for the review.

HUH?

Sounds like someone is behind me with a Butcher Knife about to 1) Rape 2) Kill me and the last sounds I hear are heavy breathing. This needs some more work buddy.

There is a darkness to it with the heavy breathing. Although, I'd try to make more evil rhythms and beats to get that dark evil vibe you may be looking for.

Anyway, man. best of luck. peace

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