pl0x
Little too simple buddy is probably a better summary for this tune than pl0x...but I really like that word :/
I think you had a really nice intro...I do. Although, it dragged on longer than it probably should have and didn't really go anywhere when it ended. You could probably play this song in a movie with a guy in an asylum wearing a white jacket with straps as it slowly zooms in on him. Really.
Other than that I think you could have put a bit more effort into this one.