Oddler's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Riot Ignition - Miracle Rock]

Wanted to hear the lyrics

Sounds like a great song without the lyrics. I might have scored this a 10 as I read the lyrics on your Author Comment....depending how well it was sung of course. This is your song or no? Sounds good either way so I'll give you an 8.

whooty2 responds:

this is a cover, but it's orginal an Techno song, all the guitar things are written by me tough.

[_-={Moonlit Cobble}=-_]

Should be #1 on top 5

I really like this one and What have I done.

This one is definitely my favorite out of the five. Sounds so laid back and peaceful. Sounds like a peaceful summers day in a field in the peaceful golden countryside.

Just read your Author's comment and you say this is a Night song about the moon. hehe. I got the completely wrong day, no? Anyway, I think it's a great song and deserves #1

MaestroRage responds:

Day, night, what's the difference? ^_^
Thank you for your kind compliments though. We worked hard on this piece!
But that's also very nice imagery, I like it. Thank you for listening!
With love,
Lady Arsenic

[Righteous Inquiry]

Hmm...questionable feedback.

The title is a bit interesting and got me in the listen. It's hard to express what doesn't move me the right way about this song. It can be a bit emotionless I think....kinda goes goofy toward the end too....Mmm...hard to articulate. I did like some parts of the drums though. Hit or miss applies on a lot of the song it seems

ragingmullet responds:

Thanks for the input. I realize that it indeed, sounds like something is missing. I have had this song like this forever and I couldn't find anything I liked to add so I just submit it as is.

[-=z3=-Moon Loop]

Cool "Loop"

I can't rate it super high because it is only 9 seconds long but I love what you have. Wish you made it a bit longer so I could justify to myself why I gave it a higher score.

If you could work on anything besides the length, I'd make the loop transition from end to start a bit smoother. I think you should re-work this into a song...it kind of has a Japanese feeling to it, doesn't it?

Zn3tz responds:

Ok if you think so, I´ll see what I can do, but I can´t guarantee that it will be good : /

[Riot Ignition - Blackout]

Wow, nice.

I really liked your explosion at the start. It had a lot of personality...after that I felt the bass getting a bit annoying and a bit repetitive and I might have skipped an extra beat on the bass for a measure or something. I haven't been a musician in a long time.

I think you have something in this song. I'd expand it a bit more instead of cycling back to older parts of the song. It's good and there is quality in here though.

whooty2 responds:

Thanks, yes indeed, maybe a little more variation in the rythm

[(FMC) -=Hamburgers=-]

Milkshakez0rz next song?

Can I have french fries with that?

Not sure how you derived "Hamburgers" to represent the song , lol but hey.

I want to hear Tofu Soup song next, ok?

FunkmasterCatking responds:

I didn't know what to name it, so I just called it hamburgers (same case with Muffins)

[Party like uh sad slut(new)]

lol

Not the biggest fan of rap. But the lyrics are funny haha

I'd work on your lyric delivery a bit on rhythm. Lyrics made me laugh though.

Deathzone responds:

thanks, yea i'm goofy on these tracks. your welcome to look thru my stuff.

[nF-Stalker]

Hmm...

I like the ominous vocals or humming in the back. You put a lot of work into the drums I can see. Still feel it's lacking a key element....hard to describe.

NeuralFusion responds:

Yeah, that's my aussie accent saying "im a stalker" in the background haha.

Yeah, This song is almost done. longest i've ever worked on a track like a few months or so. Usually i complete my songs in like 2 hours :(

The key element was Harder drums and a underlining deep pad.

[Acoustic Medley]

Song is awesome

Real acoustic too? I like this it has a nice vibe to it. Peaceful and carefree to me.

I think when the Piano comes in that really does enhance the song by a large margin. I had to give this one a 10.

BassMaxer responds:

Yes.
Real Acoustic :]
Thanks much appreciated.

[Zero GFX -=- Black Melody]

Nice drums.

I think the drumming is awesome. You did a great job with the drumming and I had to leave a comment. Very very good drums damnit!!!

It gets more intense half way out of the song. Very intense tune I like the ending a lot as well. Nice work!

nightsurfermusic responds:

Whao! Glad you like i, I messed around with a sliced beat for the drums. Came out pretty nice. Sounds like an escape scene or something like that.

Thanks for the review!