Vocals need work
I don't think the lyrics to the song are bad. I'm so glad you posted them in your Author Comment because I hate when authors don't. It's harder to get into the song for the first listen without them. Although, the vocals aren't as sharp on-point as I'd like...
Are there two vocalists? The guy saying, "I had a dream about YOU" a second vocalist? I don't think his voice is too bad. It songs like some old Seattle Grunge if you ask me.