Hrmm
Hey again...I rated your last song a bit ago. Here we go...
This song sounds actually a bit more pleasing than the last song. Although, the static and sound quality should be upped. It sounds a bit distorted still. The technique you are using to distort your voice gives it a very grainy static sound.
I like what you're doing with the way you deliver the song but it is still a bit un-smooth in some way. Maybe it's the rhythm in the way you deliver it. Anyways, I'd work on the sound quality the most.