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You really did create a unique sound in here not many people touch on lol. Not sure if the effect you're giving off was intentional but it sounds kinda goofy and dopey (until the dramatic ending). Like I picture that one guy from Popeye that was kinda chunky who ate mad amounts of Hamburgers. He was kinda "goofy and dopey" is what I mean. It would be a great theme song for him waddling into the screen (since he was fat :P).
I think the song is interesting though because no one really does things like this. I'm not sure if it was intentional but i think it's pretty cool for that kind of character :P
If it weren't for the ending I would think tihs song would be a perfect theme song for him or someone with that roll / character as it intereferes a bit with the overall thing. Sounds good though. Gotta give you an 8 and a 5. Peace!
-Oddler
Author's Response:
yeah, now that you've mentioned it i can see that. sorry the ending ruined it for you though. P.S. I think the "goofy and dopey" guy is Bruno.
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You got a pretty dramatic cinematic feeling on this song. Not a whole lot of people make these types of songs on Newgrounds Audio Portal and I think that's cool. Brings some fresh content to break the mold.
I do have one major complaint for about the first minute of the song that may or may not be easily tweaked. I'm really not sure what instrument it was...I swear to you I'm horrendous at naming some of these instruments...but it's the main sound that almost sounds like a violin or something...its the first instrument you hear playing at the start. After the song explodes I would have changed that up since , to me, it subtracted a bit from the cinematicness of the song...like... It was good up until that part after it explodes.
The song itself is pretty good and I like it but that's the only real thorn in the song that , I could feel, that didn't escalate my emotions because of. Just a tip though in the review I had to say. Best of luck to you. Nice song. This review is the fucking great wall of China now isn't it :/
Owell. Nice song. Peace.
-Oddler-
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I will see if i can fix the odd sounding violins (yes, you got the name correct). - Edit - Fixed it.
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This is some good shit. The only thing I could think of to enhance this song , since it already is kicking major ass , was to have used real instruments.
The song is really good and personally I wouldn't worry too much about the suggestion. Iz g00 and has some huge balls attachd to this song. Some lyrics would be pretty cool too but I don't think it's necessary...I think music carries more weight on the actual instruments than on the lyrics. Kids these days are all about the vocals. Lame.
Anyway, nice work. Giving you a 10 and I already hit 5 after only listening to 3 seconds of the song since I could tell it was going to be kick ass. GOGOGO
Author's Response:
That's true but I am adding vocals to this. and thanks
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Hi. Interesting intro you have there. Sounds like what happens when you shove a singing bird in water and attempt to drown the feathery little creature doesn't it :P
The actual piece could use a bit more work...didn't quite sound too swell.
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hi. the sound quality isn't so good on this one. I'd raise the kbps and possibly raise the volume. From what I can hear I feel almost demasculinized. May want to work on all three and you could have a much nicer submission! I still think it's a decent song though so I'll toss you a 7. Peace.
Author's Response:
i think you´re right, i should do something with the sound
but thanks anyway for your vote
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If it weren't for the loud hissing sound at the start this would be taken as a more serious submission. Of course...raising the sound quality would help. Somehow....with all those Fuck Yous in your comment box....that you knew what you were doing.
Well I gave my advice. You have a damn good day now. You hear me? You have a DAMN good day.......! Peace.
-Oddler-
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YEAH!!!!!
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I'd put in a bit more time in making songs. A bit too short and the sound wasn't super inspiring. Keep your head up. Just make them longer and add a bit more diversity in the song.
Author's Response:
Will do, usually when i make songs i have inspiration or just bored. :D
This one i don't know i just threw it all together.
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Great song! Totally loved it. You rock. Wow. You're great. You're up there with Suaron. Nice. Cool beet. Nice diddy. Vote highed.
Author's Response:
How the fuck am I a spam artist in the audio portal?
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Loved the drums. The vocals in the background sound pretty cool and almost sounds cinematic. I swear to god this could be in a movie in some Emo part like you suggest :3
Hehe, nice work! ....Wait a minute...you didn't steal this do you?-
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i understand it's a loop but it's a little too short for my full liking. I think you could turn this tiny part into maybe a sub rhythm in a full complete song and give it a real nice taste and vibe to it.
I would give this higher but It's only 17 seconds :P. I think you could really do something with it...so keep your head up.
-Oddler-
Author's Response:
Thanks.
Hmm...
Maybe if I have time.
I was trying to make it a full song, but it turn out so well.
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